Tuesday, 24 July 2007

 
Every sad song you hear could be the soundtrack to your life,
No one hears you when you sit alone and cry,
People look over you or talk to the next guy,
You often think, why do I try?
 
 
The clouds seem to like opening up on you,
and you smile through the tears, as you're told to do,
You feel alone, sitting on a crowded bus,
You're told to 'keep your chin up', no one makes a fuss
 
 
You're going through the motions, heading towards a goal,
but someone forgot to tell you just what you're aiming for,
Life's not enough, and you're as bored as can be,
None of this is right, this isn't what it's meant to be!
 
 
Steven Moore '07'

13 comments:

nightmaremom said...

YEOUZER!  This is so deep babes......   I wish I could make all things beautiful and wonderful for you.  I do.  More then you'll ever know or understand..........  
but I gotta a secret....   I hear you *smooch*
love ya
xxxxx

lisa41076 said...

Stevie, I like that poem , you are a gifted writer, Hugs Lisa XO

mansnott said...

Beautiful words that say a lot. Gazxxx

jeadie05 said...

You wrote that ? wow Steve... Beautiful ...love Jan xx

eml625 said...

I LOVE that......

E.

julydarby said...

Why so blue?
*hugs*
heather

edwardssoapy said...

Lovely poem.
I can relate to it so much.

*HUGS*

Leigh :o)
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ktkamanski said...

So much said in a short time! Thanks for sharing! Hope your enjoying your day!
Katie
http://journals.aol.com/ktkamanski/HappyBeingMe/

emabecmar said...

you my friend are a very good poet. ((((((hugs))))))
Love ya lots,
Cindy xoxoxoxo

ally123130585918 said...

Stevie that is a lovely poem ~ can you put it to music and sing it for us ~ Ally x

seraphoflove9001 said...

You are so talented Ste! I loved the poem. ;o)
Lisa

nay0114 said...

Thank you for sharing. I no talent like that. You're like my DD2 she can write stuff that would make you cry at the drop of a hat. Hope you're having a great day.
Take care, Chrissie

heavenlybama said...

You're a wonderful poet!
Hugs,
D
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